Sunday, August 7, 2011

How can I fix this short paragraph?

I represent myself as a cheerful person, happy go loving. But at first I could come off as an intense individual. I have fondness toward the mysterious. When there is a mystery that has eluded me. It scratches my bone, and then I can become quite determined in figure it out. You’ll usually catch me in sunny and optimistic mood that sometimes may tend to bluntness. In many ways I’m very enthusiastic, and open in all that I do. I do have an inclination to be bluntly honest and frank, or at least straightforward and much to the point.

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